WendyandGoofy
Earning My Ears
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- Jan 22, 2002
My son had to write the obligatory paragraph about spring break. He doesn't write anything longer than he has to, so it is interesting what he chose to mention. I have left all errors of spelling and syntax because I like it that way! The teacher did suggest he use his little dictionary more next time!
Here it is:
"At spring break I went on a Disney Cruse calld the Disney Magic. To get on we had to say we love Tom. On the Disney Magic we wacht a lot of Disney movies. They showd Pinoceo a lot we were sik of it. They had plays each night. Most of the plays were founy. We stayed up to 9:45 each night. It was the best vacation I ever had!"
I thought it was telling that he only talked about the things we did together as a family. I also thought it was funny that he never mentioned any of the beaches or islands! Also, as much as we got tired of Pinocchio on the movie channel - he sure put the tv on it every time we were in the room! Another interesting point - he made no mention of the fire! We are hoping to go again in a few years - it was expensive but very nice!
Here it is:
"At spring break I went on a Disney Cruse calld the Disney Magic. To get on we had to say we love Tom. On the Disney Magic we wacht a lot of Disney movies. They showd Pinoceo a lot we were sik of it. They had plays each night. Most of the plays were founy. We stayed up to 9:45 each night. It was the best vacation I ever had!"
I thought it was telling that he only talked about the things we did together as a family. I also thought it was funny that he never mentioned any of the beaches or islands! Also, as much as we got tired of Pinocchio on the movie channel - he sure put the tv on it every time we were in the room! Another interesting point - he made no mention of the fire! We are hoping to go again in a few years - it was expensive but very nice!
